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[Mar. 17th, 2007|04:47 am] |
Okay lover, so here are the lyrics I've been working on. You passed out on me on the phone and it died, so I couldn't call you back, so I finished these instead.
Midnight again and you just need to breathe
Turn on the radio, shut off the TV
But you can’t close your eyes
Though the notes, chords, and ties
Try to hold you and put you to sleep
You feel like you’re drowning inside of your sheets
There’s a breath in the air but it’s just out of reach
A familiar feeling
Counting dots on the ceiling
Forming constellations with each
All that is verse one there. Then I tried really hard to finish this chorus but this is all I could come up with:
For anyone who has loved and then lost
And believes it's not better
But I'd like that to be the end of the chorus, so I would like to write something before that, not after it. We can discuss that in person while you fiddle with your guitar.
Then we do a half-verse with just one stanza sort of thing, just like the first verse:
You’re still so your body will just fall away
Your eyes, ears, and heart are the only to stay
You feel inside out
And you still have a doubt
That you see, hear, and feel as you lay
Awake
And then switch gears - that last "Awake" there is just like an extra little thing so that we can lead into what is next here - the bridge.
But your eyelids grow heavy, and lie themselves down
Your ears fill with humming and the music is drowned
Your heart considers both options ahead
Of lying or drowning itself in your bed
“I think I’ll just stay up, dear
You sleep and I’ll wait up here”
It whispers to you, and it settles it’s beat
As your soundtrack ends once more and starts it’s repeat
And then you do the chorus one more time ("For anyone who has loved and then lost, and believes it's not better"). I have some ideas for it already, so we can sit down and talk it out. I wrote it to have a very thump-thump rhythm like a heartbeat. If you have any ideas, I really want to hear them.
I love you : )
Your baby,
Petrie |
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[Feb. 17th, 2007|09:10 pm] |
You once wrote this to me and I'd like to write it back. I hope you still feel the same, feel as strongly as you did then, that you might say that you still mean everything you said. Sometimes I feel like I messed something up along the way and I can't make you feel so uncontrollably in love with me again. Know that I'm utterly and uncontrollably in love with you, though...
I’d like you to tell me how much I mean to you.
I’d like to know what is going on in your head sometimes.
I’d like you to know that I’d die for you.
I’d like to never hurt you again.
I’d like you to know how much I’ve grown because of you.
I’d like you to know you are my best friend.
I’d like you to know that I’m very insecure.
I’d like you to know that just hearing your voice makes me feel better.
I’d like you to know that I never once have lost hope in you.
I’d like you to know that I’ve had dreams of us being married with children.
I’d like you to know that I’ve had dreams about how terrible my life would be without you.
I’d like you to know you inspire me.
I’d like you to know you astonish me.
I’d like you to use up your full potential.
I’d like you not to ever forget me.
I’d like you to know that my love for you has become unconditional.
I’d like to know that yours for me is the same.
I’d like you to know I love you more than anyone else is capable of loving you, in a different and unique way that no one else can reproduce.
<3 Petrie |
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PS I had to change the password... it is now 1nakedbaby |
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